Only If You'll Be Good
Kiddies motivational poem contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This poem would definitely appeal to young children! It sounds like the perfect day off for a child. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This poem would definitely appeal to young children! It sounds like the perfect day off for a child. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
Comment from Barry Penfold
A great poem. Lovely rhyming and image and fits the bill as it certainly motivates the kids to stay home. Only kidding. Thanks for the laughs and the smiles. Must go close to the winner's circle in my opinion.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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A great poem. Lovely rhyming and image and fits the bill as it certainly motivates the kids to stay home. Only kidding. Thanks for the laughs and the smiles. Must go close to the winner's circle in my opinion.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Haha! Glad you got a chuckle from this. Thanks so much for your kind review!
