Don't Lick Too Quick
How to enjoy an ice cream cone4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I don't understand; why did this kiddie porn...oops, typo there, kiddie POEM... cause me to sweat and breathe faster? I am obviously going down...er, sorry again--COMING down with something!
Anyway, what a lovely read, and such an adorable and innocent picture to accompany it. It reminded me of when Olivia Newton John sang "Let's Get Physical," which included lyrics about "let's get animal; let's get into animal. Let me hear your body roar..." and then came out in her little pastel workout clothes and fashion-forward headband because she was so wholesome and what was wrong with all of us thinking otherwise!
You slay me, Harry.
xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I don't understand; why did this kiddie porn...oops, typo there, kiddie POEM... cause me to sweat and breathe faster? I am obviously going down...er, sorry again--COMING down with something!
Anyway, what a lovely read, and such an adorable and innocent picture to accompany it. It reminded me of when Olivia Newton John sang "Let's Get Physical," which included lyrics about "let's get animal; let's get into animal. Let me hear your body roar..." and then came out in her little pastel workout clothes and fashion-forward headband because she was so wholesome and what was wrong with all of us thinking otherwise!
You slay me, Harry.
xoxo
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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When I think about licking slowly, I start to breathe a little quicker too. I have learned to use my tongue in pleasureful ways both to give and take. Thanks for the read and so pleased I quickened your breathe.
Comment from zanya
It's a delightful poem inviting the reader to share that special moment in a child's life as they enjoy that wonderful summer treat of an icecream cone- so well constructed
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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It's a delightful poem inviting the reader to share that special moment in a child's life as they enjoy that wonderful summer treat of an icecream cone- so well constructed
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the read and review. Appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Kiddies Motivational Poem writing prompt. On the off-chance that any child out there needs motivation or instruction on eating ice cream, you have it all covered perfectly! :-) you made me want an ice cream truck to appear on my street NOW! Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the Kiddies Motivational Poem writing prompt. On the off-chance that any child out there needs motivation or instruction on eating ice cream, you have it all covered perfectly! :-) you made me want an ice cream truck to appear on my street NOW! Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Ah, yes. I hope the ice cream truck comes soon. And be careful how you lick your treat. You don't want it to drip or fall to the ground.
Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from jessizero
I liked this "motivational" poem for children. It's true that ice cream is something that can never be outgrown, and the "instructions" on how to enjoy it were sweet. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I liked this "motivational" poem for children. It's true that ice cream is something that can never be outgrown, and the "instructions" on how to enjoy it were sweet. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the read and review. And be careful how you lick your ice cream cone.
