Mama's Little Helper
There's lots of things to do for...6 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This poem is simply a little gem filled with the joy of everyday life and living- family caring and sharing and especially sharing love and laughter - thanks for reminding us of these sometimes forgotten joys- richly deserved win,
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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This poem is simply a little gem filled with the joy of everyday life and living- family caring and sharing and especially sharing love and laughter - thanks for reminding us of these sometimes forgotten joys- richly deserved win,
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. :)
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem is so adorable. I can just picture it in my mind! It would give children a good reason to help out, knowing that their efforts are noticed. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This poem is so adorable. I can just picture it in my mind! It would give children a good reason to help out, knowing that their efforts are noticed. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poem and its rhymes flow perfectly.
The kitten she received was a sweet part too.
Your last line sums up your poem very well.
Good luck with this and all of your writing.
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Author,
Your poem and its rhymes flow perfectly.
The kitten she received was a sweet part too.
Your last line sums up your poem very well.
Good luck with this and all of your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from gansach
This is a sweet and fun poem which is a great entry for the Kiddie Poem competition. It would be an attractive poem for children to enjoy. It has a nice rhyme and rhythm. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is a sweet and fun poem which is a great entry for the Kiddie Poem competition. It would be an attractive poem for children to enjoy. It has a nice rhyme and rhythm. Best wishes!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, l really appreciate this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is the best entry for the contest that I've seen so far. The mistake that the other entries made was thinking that adult conversations would appeal to children
Your post got down to a child's level. You were talking as if to a child. When would think anybody writing for this prompt would do that But, you're the first one I've seen that did that
Very well rhyming and great flow. You deserve one of my sixers. I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is the best entry for the contest that I've seen so far. The mistake that the other entries made was thinking that adult conversations would appeal to children
Your post got down to a child's level. You were talking as if to a child. When would think anybody writing for this prompt would do that But, you're the first one I've seen that did that
Very well rhyming and great flow. You deserve one of my sixers. I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this fantastic 6 star review...it means so much to me. :)
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is such a wonderful little motivational poem that speaks highly of a little child, commemorates the marriage of a man and woman, celebrates the life of family all at the same time while encouraging a strong work ethic. This is a great contest entry.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is such a wonderful little motivational poem that speaks highly of a little child, commemorates the marriage of a man and woman, celebrates the life of family all at the same time while encouraging a strong work ethic. This is a great contest entry.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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All core values l believe in! Thank you for this nice review. :)
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You are most welcome, my friend.
