2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from shelley kaye
i'm not sure i understand this one... a child's laughter and a painter running out of canvas... thought it's probably just me lol
still nice imagery i can see the painter running out of room and not knowing where to go next...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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i'm not sure i understand this one... a child's laughter and a painter running out of canvas... thought it's probably just me lol
still nice imagery i can see the painter running out of room and not knowing where to go next...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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it's a poetic zen concept. I used the personification of 'laughter' and abstract, to something concrete "painting"... it's impossible to do it literary. In Zen philosophy, everything in nature is connected, like the stars in a bucket of water, dusk or dawn in the flowers, etc...
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My youngest granddaughters always enjoy painting and often do run out of canvas, and then the table gets painted. LOL The little girl laughing in precious and infectious. Thank you for giving me and extra reason to smile today.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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My youngest granddaughters always enjoy painting and often do run out of canvas, and then the table gets painted. LOL The little girl laughing in precious and infectious. Thank you for giving me and extra reason to smile today.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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my grandson is an artist too and his problem is writing on his drawing paper... he always runs out of space ... it's cute
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's cute! I love the sound of children's laughter. It's so pure and joyful and it lasts for such a brief time. When we get older the joy isn't so pure anymore. No wonder that painter ran out of canvas and probably of paint, too!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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That's cute! I love the sound of children's laughter. It's so pure and joyful and it lasts for such a brief time. When we get older the joy isn't so pure anymore. No wonder that painter ran out of canvas and probably of paint, too!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. (*÷*) have a wonderful weekend.
Love
Marival
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you, too! 💖💖
Comment from RJ Heritage
Perhaps the child's laughter was so unending or hard to conceptulize that the painter after many tries, felt that his renditions were inadequate. Sometimes, the simples and most natural things are the most difficult to explain.
RJ
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Perhaps the child's laughter was so unending or hard to conceptulize that the painter after many tries, felt that his renditions were inadequate. Sometimes, the simples and most natural things are the most difficult to explain.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Yes, you understand the poem well.
Thank you very much for, have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A child's laughter is one of the most beautiful and infectious sounds I know. How to depict that joy would certainly take excessive amounts of canvas. As ever, your verse is skilfully expressed in this succinct form, complemented with delightful visual which, in itself, is enough to make one smile with pleasure. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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A child's laughter is one of the most beautiful and infectious sounds I know. How to depict that joy would certainly take excessive amounts of canvas. As ever, your verse is skilfully expressed in this succinct form, complemented with delightful visual which, in itself, is enough to make one smile with pleasure. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for, have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy