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Feisty Fiona*s Fun-filled Friday

Don*t mess with us girls, butthead

2 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed this well told, humorous story about the girl who stood up for her friend and herself. The story had a realistic ending (Homework, drill, no chance to play) and a happy ending (mum could see in me the rebel that she used to be). Well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed this "kiddies motovational poem." It was full of sweet imagery, and I loved your rhymes. I never acted like this, but it brought back happy memories.
Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    Thank you.