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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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When my older boys were babies, I had a 55-gallon tank. I don't remember how many nights I sat in a rocking chair, nursing and rocking my babies. I'd watch the fish swim around. It was very relaxing. I actually miss those times. Thank you for the wonderful reminder.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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i am assuming it's called an angel fish because it look as though it has wings?
love that bottom pic just swimming through the dark waters...

a great haiku with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Very nice overall presentation Gypsy!

Do like your artwork and font choice to sell your offering for our review. In my mind, angel(fish) and spirit is a subtle connection.

Beautifully done.

Mark

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark

    Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful haiku about the lovely angel fish. I used to have one when we had an aquarium at home. When I would get off from a stressful night at our local police department I would set and just watch our fish. That was so peaceful! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Teri

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I love Angel fish, the way they seem to float on by. Your delicate color palette compliment the fish very well. There name is conected to the celestial being that follow the spirit.
We had largest aquarium when I was in my early twenties, the Angels were always the star attraction,. How I still long to see them in their natural hábitat.
RJ

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    I miss having an aquarium too. I moved too many times. Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 13-Jun-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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Those are pretty fish. It's all a mystery how the Lord's angels move around us and we have no idea of when and where they are allowed to intervene on our behalf. Lovely poem with both physical and spiritual messages!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a nicely worded and beautifully presented haiku about the angelfish. I enjoyed it very much and its moves very well when it's read aloud I wish you a very good weekend. May God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia.

    Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
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I once had two angelfish in an aquarium with other fish. One of the angelfish went nuts and started murdering all of the other fish in the tank. The angelfish in your poem sounds a lot better than mine. I liked your descriptions, and I liked your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    OMG.... I didn't know angel fish do that. It should be call devilfish. LoL I had a beta fish that had to be kept away from other beta fish. I guess the same happens with people.

    Thank you very much, Jessi

    Gypsy