Empty Nest
When they are all gone2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
You do a wonderful job of showing how the children moving on is so difficult. The words of "Children moved on and gone, they roam" speaks volumes about the passage of time and watching the younger generation carve out their own paths.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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You do a wonderful job of showing how the children moving on is so difficult. The words of "Children moved on and gone, they roam" speaks volumes about the passage of time and watching the younger generation carve out their own paths.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reviewing and for the kind comments.
Comment from jessizero
I think you may be one syllable short on that second line. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I think you may be one syllable short on that second line. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you. I will make certain to check.
