Masterpiece
Sandstone in Arizona11 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
My goodness look at all those colors. The poem was short but good. I just wrote "How to get rid of an unwanted Guest" Go to the bathroom first. I was laughing so hard I peed. Simian Savant sent me a few, his were so insidious and hysterical, I had to add some to the list, Go get a giggle. :-)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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My goodness look at all those colors. The poem was short but good. I just wrote "How to get rid of an unwanted Guest" Go to the bathroom first. I was laughing so hard I peed. Simian Savant sent me a few, his were so insidious and hysterical, I had to add some to the list, Go get a giggle. :-)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you Karen for the review. Love your last post. So funny!!
Comment from Esther Brown
Been there, seen that. Beautiful drive from Phoenix through Jerome, down the windy escarpment to Sedona and up Oak Creek. Amazing how there can be so many colors. Esther
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Been there, seen that. Beautiful drive from Phoenix through Jerome, down the windy escarpment to Sedona and up Oak Creek. Amazing how there can be so many colors. Esther
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Masterpiece, has the proper formatting and allows the perspective of the carved rock, shaped through the millennia to appear now as proof of being.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This 2-5-2, Masterpiece, has the proper formatting and allows the perspective of the carved rock, shaped through the millennia to appear now as proof of being.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from zanya
Wow - what a beautiful sight formed by Mother Nature and at Her own pace for humans to view -and yes a masterpiece does that time - and is all the better for that.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Wow - what a beautiful sight formed by Mother Nature and at Her own pace for humans to view -and yes a masterpiece does that time - and is all the better for that.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. I like the presentation but the font is hard to read. White font would be better.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Wonderful entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. I like the presentation but the font is hard to read. White font would be better.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from patcelaw
God uses time and trials to bring us into being the masterpiece that he has designed us to be. I loved your short poem and I wish you the very best with the writing. Also, I want to congratulate you on your milestone.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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God uses time and trials to bring us into being the masterpiece that he has designed us to be. I loved your short poem and I wish you the very best with the writing. Also, I want to congratulate you on your milestone.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the great review and for congratulations of my milestone.
Comment from Sally Law
Welcome to FanStory, mystery poet. You have a dessert jewel here in this short verse poem. I remember my trip to Arizona and the visit to the Grand Canyon was much like this. As the sun went, the canyon itself morphed into a masterpiece of colors and patterns all throughout the day. Thank you for sharing and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Welcome to FanStory, mystery poet. You have a dessert jewel here in this short verse poem. I remember my trip to Arizona and the visit to the Grand Canyon was much like this. As the sun went, the canyon itself morphed into a masterpiece of colors and patterns all throughout the day. Thank you for sharing and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
What a stunning image! A very succinct and true 2-5-2 poem which gives rise to the thoughts that only nature itself can produce the true masterpieces of the world. So much said in so few words. Excellent.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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What a stunning image! A very succinct and true 2-5-2 poem which gives rise to the thoughts that only nature itself can produce the true masterpieces of the world. So much said in so few words. Excellent.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and a positive message
about the importance of a masterpiece
throughout time.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and a positive message
about the importance of a masterpiece
throughout time.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post! Your poem was lovely, and it had the correct syllable count. The picture was beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! Your poem was lovely, and it had the correct syllable count. The picture was beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your review.
