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Did I Win?

A short poem.

4 total reviews 
Comment from BunnyS
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Ha ha! This is cute! No mincing words, let's get straight to the point. Clever and different... I like that.
Good job on the poem and good luck with the contest.
Bunny

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from artisart4u
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You won because Santa reads letters and gives to the little boys and girls their wish. Hers was to win a contest.
Your picture is nice about a young girl writing to Santa.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line
and good luck with this poem.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I guess you'll find out! I love how your tone highlights the hopefulness of winning and leaves me with a sense excitement for you. I hope you win!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you! I hope so too!
Comment from jessizero
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This was a fun and creative take on the "2-5-2 poem" writing prompt. You got the syllable count right. I guess we will see if it comes true or not. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you!