2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
even the freaky looking scarecrow couldn't deplete the message of gratitude within the simplest of miracles, nor the veil of diminishing light slight my sight of the bigger picture... and that's the way I feel about you. The miracle and magic of wonderful connection and friendship on a daily basis, no matter the season or mood.
I'm now feeling like the scarecrow is bowing out of respect for two enlightened souls evolving:)) Of course it's us... and everyone else who chooses the path of conscious thought.
Very thought provoking Katauta Marival. As always a lot of detail and work has gone into the composition and presentation which I appreciate and acknowledge most talented poet. And the fact that you lay out a path to the explanation of the style, form and use of the Katauta does not go unnoticed.
With our thoughts we create...
the power of observation.
Warmest regards,
Jamie.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi MariVal,
even the freaky looking scarecrow couldn't deplete the message of gratitude within the simplest of miracles, nor the veil of diminishing light slight my sight of the bigger picture... and that's the way I feel about you. The miracle and magic of wonderful connection and friendship on a daily basis, no matter the season or mood.
I'm now feeling like the scarecrow is bowing out of respect for two enlightened souls evolving:)) Of course it's us... and everyone else who chooses the path of conscious thought.
Very thought provoking Katauta Marival. As always a lot of detail and work has gone into the composition and presentation which I appreciate and acknowledge most talented poet. And the fact that you lay out a path to the explanation of the style, form and use of the Katauta does not go unnoticed.
With our thoughts we create...
the power of observation.
Warmest regards,
Jamie.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hola, Jaime,
thank you for reviewing my older posts, I appreciate it. It has been nice to see you around here, lately. I pray for you and hope you are well. I feel grateful for our friendship too. You are a constant north star in my constellation.
I love scary movies and stories so I had to go with the creepy, freaky-looking scarecrow. LoL
Con cariņo, besitos y abrazos, amigo mio,
MariVal
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem. I love the way it seemed to zero in on a scene that could sometimes be ignored or overlooked. A field of grain, mostly just a golden field yet the poem made me see the individual parts of the plant. I could imagine the rich warm colors glowing under the setting sun. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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This was a beautiful poem. I love the way it seemed to zero in on a scene that could sometimes be ignored or overlooked. A field of grain, mostly just a golden field yet the poem made me see the individual parts of the plant. I could imagine the rich warm colors glowing under the setting sun. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Yes, you have a vivid imagination, that's part of the reasons I love Haiku, it's such a visual art form. I close my eyes and the words'imagery take me there.
Thank you very much, have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A scarecrow bowing this authenticity to the barely veiled in golden dusk. This poem is rich in imagery. Thank you for sharing your special talent with us. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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A scarecrow bowing this authenticity to the barely veiled in golden dusk. This poem is rich in imagery. Thank you for sharing your special talent with us. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing gypsy and have a wonderful day
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing gypsy and have a wonderful day
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Dr Ricky
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You always pick the best pictures for your poems! I liked the scarecrow "bowing" but I think you want "bows in reverence" if that's not too many syllables. "Revere" is a verb.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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You always pick the best pictures for your poems! I liked the scarecrow "bowing" but I think you want "bows in reverence" if that's not too many syllables. "Revere" is a verb.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I wasn't sure and I checked the dictionary but I guess I didn't understand.
Love,
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
should have a pic of a scarecrow bowing lol
a great katauta
makes me think of sting's fields of gold song
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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should have a pic of a scarecrow bowing lol
a great katauta
makes me think of sting's fields of gold song
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Of course, these are both features that take place on a barley farm. Dusk is a beautiful time of the evening. I can just imagine how the barley catch the last streams of sunlight before it goes dark. In my mind's eye, I am also seeing the calm, 'effortlessly' breeze as it gently persuades the scarecrow to yield.
Beautiful poem with good imergry.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Of course, these are both features that take place on a barley farm. Dusk is a beautiful time of the evening. I can just imagine how the barley catch the last streams of sunlight before it goes dark. In my mind's eye, I am also seeing the calm, 'effortlessly' breeze as it gently persuades the scarecrow to yield.
Beautiful poem with good imergry.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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You have a wonderful imagination
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Rich, majestic barley, bathed in golden sunshine, with even the scarecrow in reverence to this glorious sight. Beautifully done, Gypsy. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Rich, majestic barley, bathed in golden sunshine, with even the scarecrow in reverence to this glorious sight. Beautifully done, Gypsy. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from zaraduck6
What a lovely katauta! I loved your choice of words, as well as the well-used literary devices. The color scheme was gorgeous and matched the stunning picture well. I am only counting 6 syllables in the end. Does "revere" have two or three syllables. Anyways, a well-written poem. Amazingly done!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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What a lovely katauta! I loved your choice of words, as well as the well-used literary devices. The color scheme was gorgeous and matched the stunning picture well. I am only counting 6 syllables in the end. Does "revere" have two or three syllables. Anyways, a well-written poem. Amazingly done!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you, I corrected it.
Thank you very much, Zara
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Yes, of course God is the Master of the harvest, the one who feeds the world, but the prosperous tend not to share with the world abroad, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : scarecrow.bows in reverence. Or scarecrow bows to revere.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Yes, of course God is the Master of the harvest, the one who feeds the world, but the prosperous tend not to share with the world abroad, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : scarecrow.bows in reverence. Or scarecrow bows to revere.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I wrote revere. Is that wrong? I checked the dictionary but I could be wrong.
Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy
Gypsy
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One bows in reverence but bows to revere. change to in from to.
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Oh, okay... thank you, I corrected it
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Most welcome