Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG! This is too funny. I love it when writers are irreverent.

I've done the choke thing often. It's usually followed by a cocking of my head in tandem with a scrunching of my entire face, and then -aloud, too, of course - "Like, HUH??!"

This is classic, and I for SURE want to see this in the Winner's Circle of this Short Poem contest!!! Good luck. xoxox

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Winner's circle. That's hilarious. LOL. I just love throwing away fake money just to ruffle feathers here and there. That's how I roll. Haha. Thank you so much for the great review and stars, Rachelle. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I can't help it sometimes. Haha

reply by Rachelle Allen on 12-Jun-2024

Oh, GAWD yes!!! It puts everything into perspective.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

well, i don't really believe boredom can kill a person - so i'd have to go with the choking LOL

a great short 15-word poem
one suggestion i have is maybe to somehow rhyme the couplet?4
eh... just a fun thought lol

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thank you for the great review, Shelley. At first I was actually going to poke some fun at the folks that rhyme these short pieces with something that rhymed. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great rest of your day.

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Oh goodness!! Being online can be boring, mind boggling or both all at the same time. I'm baffled everyday!! Good graphic to go along with !! Best of luck.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Lol. That's for sure. Thank you for the great review and stars, Nicole. I'm glad you liked this silliness.