It Talks!
No more self check out for me.2 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The "Checking you out" contest seemingly has a theme that arouses arousing thoughts. Yours was more than the first, and it made me wonder if Walmart sells such alluring goods. I wouldn't know as I don't do W.M.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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The "Checking you out" contest seemingly has a theme that arouses arousing thoughts. Yours was more than the first, and it made me wonder if Walmart sells such alluring goods. I wouldn't know as I don't do W.M.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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According to my daughter, Walmart has almost everything you need or want. Thanks for read and feedback.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
How do they think of these contests? I'll never know. I never write for them because squeezing certain words in or certain thing it's not for me. I need my freedom
This is a well written story with a lot of humorous dialogue. Now the question is, will he really give those things to his mom? I don't think so It would be very difficult for a son to do that. I suppose he could give them to his dad before his mom sees them. Now that auntie Char has been told I'm sure she'll be checking with the mom about getting those things.
We both know who the sexual items were for. But he may have to give them to his mom.
Here It was
" I heard a familiar voice. I was my Aunt Charlotte. I shoved "
Here she's always been
"She continued, "She always been the sexy one. "
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
How do they think of these contests? I'll never know. I never write for them because squeezing certain words in or certain thing it's not for me. I need my freedom
This is a well written story with a lot of humorous dialogue. Now the question is, will he really give those things to his mom? I don't think so It would be very difficult for a son to do that. I suppose he could give them to his dad before his mom sees them. Now that auntie Char has been told I'm sure she'll be checking with the mom about getting those things.
We both know who the sexual items were for. But he may have to give them to his mom.
Here It was
" I heard a familiar voice. I was my Aunt Charlotte. I shoved "
Here she's always been
"She continued, "She always been the sexy one. "
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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No, Susie got them. And it was a wonderful trip. Thanks for the read and feedback.