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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from Jumbo J
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Okay MariVal(((((, I'k thinking... if there was an award for detail and dedication to presentation, you'd be taking home the prize without doubt. So perfectly matched, crafted and delivered.

But, you or your muse taking a break within thoughts of faraway lands... no, methinks that would only provide more material for your beautiful mind to create even more... wow, is that possible to produce more than what is already a constant flow of creative magic?

If you find the time and you're anywhere close by... please know you and your muse are very welcome to drop in and use me as medium:))

Beautiful work with this dreamy-whimsical Gogyohka MariVal... yes, delightfully beautiful!

With our thoughts we create...
soul wandering journey's.

Warmest regards,
Jamie.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
    Hola, Jaime, (me gusta tu nombre en Espaņol)

    Thank you very much, it's always good to hear from you. Your outstanding reviews are insightful and generous. You know me and my writing well. It's good to have reviewers who "get it".

    I always use people I admire and feel close to for inspiration...... doesn't every poet and writer do the same? Sometimes is a mix of myself and the one I am thinking of.

    This one is a silly one meant to be humorous. My poor muse works overtime. LoL

    Con cariņo, besitos y abrazos, amigo mio,

    MariVal
Comment from gansach
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As always your presentation is stunning here. The picture is beautiful (for some reason, only the top artwork is visible to me) and I do like very much the changing shades of the print. Sometimes a moment to step back from the occupations that involve us deeply to relax and refresh our minds is a necessity. Well done!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, gansach

    Gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Oh my goodness, I am so ready for some summer. It's the middle of June here in Michigan and we are still wearing jackets.

I've work here. Beautiful imagery.
D

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Douglas

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from juliaSjames
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This delightful witty write made me giggle. Yes, sometimes we writers stretch our poor muses beyond endurance and they have to take a break!
Love the write and the entire presentation, Marival.
It's a lighthearted teasing comment on our fixation on contests and ratings. Our muses are saying "Chill" LoL

Blessings, Cheryl

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Cheryl. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by juliaSjames on 12-Jun-2024
    You?re welcome, Marival

Comment from dovemarie
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hi Gypsy, good image of a female portraying the season of summer, and nice picture of flowers growing and blossoming. Also liked the colors used in the wording.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, dovemarie.

    Gypsy
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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This was a very pleasant read all the way through. I like the graphic and the overall presentation you did here. It helps further even more. This was a lighthearted and I enjoyed it

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Nicole.

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I guess all muses need a break. Even yours. LOL Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I totally enjoyed the experience. Your talent shines through.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    LoL. A bit of humor. Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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more likely hiding away inside with the ac LOL!

cute and interesting gogyohka
love the colours and imagery of faraway places
smooth through through the lines

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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After I read this, my first thought was, "Oh! Gypsy's going to be taking a break." Then I read the extensive Author's Notes and said, "Nope; this over-ambitious poet does not know how to do that!"

Gorgeous poem, and you found such a perfect graphic to accompany it. Very enjoyable read.

xoxo

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle. May you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I like the premise of the "summer muse
lost in adventures."
-Apparently the muse needed a
break from the "over-ambitious poet."
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much,
    Pam

    Gypsy
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jun-2024
    You are very welcome, Gypsy.