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Chatty

humorous 5/7/5

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Comment from jessizero
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I don't think you need the "fot" at the end of the second line. It's one too many syllables, and it's repeated at the beginning of the third line. I did find this poem amusing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Yes thanks for reviewing and sharing -much appreciated zanya
Comment from Erika Whittle
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This is funny! Alexa needs someone to talk to lol
I might suggest slightly rewarding the end so 'for' isn't used twice in a row.
Great job and good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thanks for sharing and useful guidelines -much appreciated zanya