Checking Out
Embarrassment at the till.2 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Some "adult" magazines. Wow! We are in trouble, aren't we? Do you really dig that stuff?
What do they say? Any port in a storm.
Funny. This was a good overall writing. It grabbed my attention and held it from start to finish. Nice work.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Some "adult" magazines. Wow! We are in trouble, aren't we? Do you really dig that stuff?
What do they say? Any port in a storm.
Funny. This was a good overall writing. It grabbed my attention and held it from start to finish. Nice work.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, following the format, gives probably the best scenario of this concept. It was initially funny, with the register cracking wise, then following the checkout item hints toward a shaky conclusion.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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This story, following the format, gives probably the best scenario of this concept. It was initially funny, with the register cracking wise, then following the checkout item hints toward a shaky conclusion.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Bill.
