Feng Shui
Some like unbalanced14 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on your 50th milestone post. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
"Just creating a happy space for you," I smiled. (you." smiled isn't a speech tag.)
"I see," I swallowed. (see." same swallowed isn't a speech tag.)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Congratulations on your 50th milestone post. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
"Just creating a happy space for you," I smiled. (you." smiled isn't a speech tag.)
"I see," I swallowed. (see." same swallowed isn't a speech tag.)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you comments.
Comment from ChibiElf
No good deed...
Cute story!
I really can't blame the homeowner, I wouldn't be happy to come back and find my house different. Though the cleaning? Two thumbs up, yes please.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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No good deed...
Cute story!
I really can't blame the homeowner, I wouldn't be happy to come back and find my house different. Though the cleaning? Two thumbs up, yes please.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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LOL! Thanks so much!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, hamachi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is a humorous entry for the contest. I like that I guess she didn't want him back. He was only trying to help.
I once did that I went to work at a big bank and somebody had given these fields, horrifically long names, and it got to be tedious to type up the code
So, I tried changing the names. I got the same reaction. I'm sure that s
he did For him doing that Feng Shui. I got in trouble because how dare I change the names, that this established person had come up with. So I just changed the names back and it was never really an issue except for the extra work that it took.
I enjoyed reading your story. I don't think we've met So, nice to meet you.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi, hamachi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is a humorous entry for the contest. I like that I guess she didn't want him back. He was only trying to help.
I once did that I went to work at a big bank and somebody had given these fields, horrifically long names, and it got to be tedious to type up the code
So, I tried changing the names. I got the same reaction. I'm sure that s
he did For him doing that Feng Shui. I got in trouble because how dare I change the names, that this established person had come up with. So I just changed the names back and it was never really an issue except for the extra work that it took.
I enjoyed reading your story. I don't think we've met So, nice to meet you.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from joann r romei
I gave you a six because I also notice things array in homes, I do elder care and most of it is a hazard , to much furniture and things on the floor can cause falls.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I gave you a six because I also notice things array in homes, I do elder care and most of it is a hazard , to much furniture and things on the floor can cause falls.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your review and the extra star.
Comment from royowen
I'm extremely suspicious of methods that claim to be wisdom, I'm sure God is perfectly able to reveal the truth to even the least wise of us, beautifully written dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I'm extremely suspicious of methods that claim to be wisdom, I'm sure God is perfectly able to reveal the truth to even the least wise of us, beautifully written dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Welcome
Comment from RodG
I know your intentions were righteous, but I would react like your friend. Don't mess with my space! Otherwise, I like your use of dialog in this story to characterize both you and your friend. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I know your intentions were righteous, but I would react like your friend. Don't mess with my space! Otherwise, I like your use of dialog in this story to characterize both you and your friend. Rod
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from jessizero
This was a cute true story flash. Sometimes our best intentions don't go over well. Congratulations on your milestone post! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This was a cute true story flash. Sometimes our best intentions don't go over well. Congratulations on your milestone post! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This was a fun little read. I know that sometimes we think we are helping people by moving things around but I guess there is something to be said for organized chaos if you will. I like the part about killing the greenery. Haha
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This was a fun little read. I know that sometimes we think we are helping people by moving things around but I guess there is something to be said for organized chaos if you will. I like the part about killing the greenery. Haha
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I guess some lessons are going to be learned in this one. We can be well intended but it turns out is not anything appreciated by the other person. : "Then I did some rearranging. Much better flow. Good energy. Pleasant placement." further trouble:
""Just creating a happy space for you," I smiled.
"I thought I had one," she mumbled as she began to shift things back. "What's this?" Staring at the fern." well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I guess some lessons are going to be learned in this one. We can be well intended but it turns out is not anything appreciated by the other person. : "Then I did some rearranging. Much better flow. Good energy. Pleasant placement." further trouble:
""Just creating a happy space for you," I smiled.
"I thought I had one," she mumbled as she began to shift things back. "What's this?" Staring at the fern." well orchestrated.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
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good job
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You are very welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the help went a little bit too far here and the intrusion was not appreciated. I know teenage girls as they were growing up hated me cleaning their rooms and disturbing things, a fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I think the help went a little bit too far here and the intrusion was not appreciated. I know teenage girls as they were growing up hated me cleaning their rooms and disturbing things, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
