Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Bill, you just nailed it Nd anyone reading this will understand how polarised your country is. It's all become so ugly. It's not the America I used to know. I will be visiting my brother and family in Mass in late August into mid September. I wonder if it it will be the last time I will ever go again. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Oh, Bill, you just nailed it Nd anyone reading this will understand how polarised your country is. It's all become so ugly. It's not the America I used to know. I will be visiting my brother and family in Mass in late August into mid September. I wonder if it it will be the last time I will ever go again. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Ulla, for seeing that message.
Comment from judiverse
Zany characters. Ron wants Miss Biggins' phone number. It figures. A lot of characters to keep track of. Ned is beginning to sound pretty sensible. The ending bit about defusing a bomb. For real or a tactic to divert attention. How a bomb threat is handled might make or break a candidate. Fun commentary, and it shows what we have to deal with this election. judi
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Zany characters. Ron wants Miss Biggins' phone number. It figures. A lot of characters to keep track of. Ned is beginning to sound pretty sensible. The ending bit about defusing a bomb. For real or a tactic to divert attention. How a bomb threat is handled might make or break a candidate. Fun commentary, and it shows what we have to deal with this election. judi
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I am trying to keep the two well known candidates to form while not taking Ned too far from his Nediness.
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Ned may be a welcome relief from what we've got. He'd surely have the leaders from other countries stumped, trying to figure out what he's saying. judi
Comment from lyenochka
Unfusing a bomb would definitely take precedence over zombies and the agent of death of bugs. LoL.
I think your rump character sounds too sane and articulate compared to the character he represents.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Unfusing a bomb would definitely take precedence over zombies and the agent of death of bugs. LoL.
I think your rump character sounds too sane and articulate compared to the character he represents.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Perhaps they could have a Rump Roast and bring him down to street level.
Comment from jim vecchio
I will be looking more forward to the outcome of your campaign story than I will for the Biden and Trump sham court trials. Is there a chance Ned will also be implicated in a trial?
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I will be looking more forward to the outcome of your campaign story than I will for the Biden and Trump sham court trials. Is there a chance Ned will also be implicated in a trial?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Sounds like a good idea.
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All your ideas are good!
Comment from nomi338
Way to distract Ned. Scaring the heck out of everyone is a very good tactic. Hearing that there may be a bomb ala casa would be enough to make me forget about everything else being discussed.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Way to distract Ned. Scaring the heck out of everyone is a very good tactic. Hearing that there may be a bomb ala casa would be enough to make me forget about everything else being discussed.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Now to just make sure there IS no bomb.
Comment from zaraduck6
A great script! I enjoyed reading everyone's different dialogue. It was quite enjoyable and funny at times. Amazing work. Well done! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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A great script! I enjoyed reading everyone's different dialogue. It was quite enjoyable and funny at times. Amazing work. Well done! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, ZD
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Bill
A bomb. Oh my That sure got everybody's attention. I look forward to the next chapter
I did not understand this part. What is Deaf fer? At first I thought it was defer but that doesn't go with the rest of the sentence.
"the Agent a Deaf fer bugs and such, brung"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hi, Bill
A bomb. Oh my That sure got everybody's attention. I look forward to the next chapter
I did not understand this part. What is Deaf fer? At first I thought it was defer but that doesn't go with the rest of the sentence.
"the Agent a Deaf fer bugs and such, brung"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Deaf equals a pronunciation of death by Ned.
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Oh. Thank you for explaining
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Oh. Thank you for explaining
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Fun and unique. I like the way the characters play off of each other. Strong work overall and I wish you all the best going forward..ahh the silence before the what? ð???
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Fun and unique. I like the way the characters play off of each other. Strong work overall and I wish you all the best going forward..ahh the silence before the what? ð???
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole
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Thank you, Nicole