My Heart Is Throbbing
The deep romantic desire for another2 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
This was a wonderful love-themed poem! I loved it very much--especially the repetitive use of the sentence 'my heart is throbbing.' So nicely done. And the rhyme scheme was brilliant. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This was a wonderful love-themed poem! I loved it very much--especially the repetitive use of the sentence 'my heart is throbbing.' So nicely done. And the rhyme scheme was brilliant. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to comment on the poem. Much appreciated.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
There is pain and angst in this phone in spite of how calmly the narrator is talking about the beautiful poetry
I think your poem is tender and soft and there is a lot of love
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
There is pain and angst in this phone in spite of how calmly the narrator is talking about the beautiful poetry
I think your poem is tender and soft and there is a lot of love
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Your comments and evaluation on the poem are much valued. Thank you.
