Jersey's World
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "JW - Part 5"A stripper and a murder.
4 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"three thousand dollars for four minute routine" not a lousy little haul for miniscule effort.
"Hemp Extract" should have been a warning.
Not sure what you mean by "riving" but you used the word more than once in the posting?
"She id like those hair colors" probably should be She did like those hair colors.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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"three thousand dollars for four minute routine" not a lousy little haul for miniscule effort.
"Hemp Extract" should have been a warning.
Not sure what you mean by "riving" but you used the word more than once in the posting?
"She id like those hair colors" probably should be She did like those hair colors.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you. I will look at those issues.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A great, action filled, ending to your book. We see Jersey/Paige as areal person who was able to fend off her assailants and revenge her friend at the same time. A great use of realism and character development. Suspense and action were perfectly blended.
Well done,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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A great, action filled, ending to your book. We see Jersey/Paige as areal person who was able to fend off her assailants and revenge her friend at the same time. A great use of realism and character development. Suspense and action were perfectly blended.
Well done,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I enjoy the way the characters have developed throughout your entries. The storyline has caught my attention and it continues to keep my attention throughout each entry. Best of luck overall.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I enjoy the way the characters have developed throughout your entries. The storyline has caught my attention and it continues to keep my attention throughout each entry. Best of luck overall.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This was an interesting story, and unfortunately too many women are getting hurt in this business. You described very well the atmosphere. Thank you for sharing and welcome back.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This was an interesting story, and unfortunately too many women are getting hurt in this business. You described very well the atmosphere. Thank you for sharing and welcome back.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.