Endgame
25 syllable poem13 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi zayna.
you ask a good question in your 25 syllable poem? Who knows? We do not seem to learn any lessons in life and all for what still killing each other in wars
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hi zayna.
you ask a good question in your 25 syllable poem? Who knows? We do not seem to learn any lessons in life and all for what still killing each other in wars
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 25 Syllable Poetry Contest. Your wise words represent the horrors of war. What will it take? That is a good question.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Wonderful entry for the 25 Syllable Poetry Contest. Your wise words represent the horrors of war. What will it take? That is a good question.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sally Law
Hey, you! This is a great entry for the 25 syllable contest. We're in the end times and wars and rumors of wars are predicted to be on the increase before the return of Jesus Christ. I personally feel we are not far from this event. Thanks for sharing and all my best in the contest.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hey, you! This is a great entry for the 25 syllable contest. We're in the end times and wars and rumors of wars are predicted to be on the increase before the return of Jesus Christ. I personally feel we are not far from this event. Thanks for sharing and all my best in the contest.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Yes crazy world - thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Wendy G
It will take total transformation of the minds and attitudes of greedy, proud, and arrogant people who lust for power and praise. Very moving and beautifully presented poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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It will take total transformation of the minds and attitudes of greedy, proud, and arrogant people who lust for power and praise. Very moving and beautifully presented poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Yes indeed -thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya
Comment from gansach
This is a very good entry for the 25 syllable poem competition--the poem poses an oft asked question. War has been a part of life since Time began. It seems we are always fated to be fighting over something. To me, the answer is obvious--live and let live. I enjoyed your poem for it gives one pause to think--much conveyed in few words. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is a very good entry for the 25 syllable poem competition--the poem poses an oft asked question. War has been a part of life since Time began. It seems we are always fated to be fighting over something. To me, the answer is obvious--live and let live. I enjoyed your poem for it gives one pause to think--much conveyed in few words. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 25 syllables well
with a good topic.
-A very good opening line showing how
war continues even though "we hope and pray."
-A very good image "fog of war."
-A very good open ended question
that doesn't have an easy answer.
-The best one is as you said, "hope and pray."
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 25 syllables well
with a good topic.
-A very good opening line showing how
war continues even though "we hope and pray."
-A very good image "fog of war."
-A very good open ended question
that doesn't have an easy answer.
-The best one is as you said, "hope and pray."
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem. How true your words are. It seems as though if is getting worse. I hope we don't get pulled into it. I love the picture. Goes nicely with the words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. How true your words are. It seems as though if is getting worse. I hope we don't get pulled into it. I love the picture. Goes nicely with the words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 25 syllable poetry contest. I wish I had the answer to your question but i pray we find the answer before things get any worse in this world. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 25 syllable poetry contest. I wish I had the answer to your question but i pray we find the answer before things get any worse in this world. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from royowen
When man loses his lust, his prejudice, his anger, his unforgiveness, there will always be war, revenge and anger stir the violence in the soul, provoked the murderous reaction, it's in all men, some recognise it and overcome, but most do not, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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When man loses his lust, his prejudice, his anger, his unforgiveness, there will always be war, revenge and anger stir the violence in the soul, provoked the murderous reaction, it's in all men, some recognise it and overcome, but most do not, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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Welcome
Comment from jessizero
This was a great twenty-five syllable poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and your message was wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This was a great twenty-five syllable poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and your message was wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya