Gone
It's a knowing.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This ends with the banal life most people live
Thic sounds like pleasant day dreaming interrupted by the phone call (good or bad). I hate it when that happens, When you're going along in a great mood and suddenly you're interrupted by a phone call however, in this case it sounds like she might be waiting for the call
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This ends with the banal life most people live
Thic sounds like pleasant day dreaming interrupted by the phone call (good or bad). I hate it when that happens, When you're going along in a great mood and suddenly you're interrupted by a phone call however, in this case it sounds like she might be waiting for the call
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This is a great presentation overall from start to finish. I love the wording of this poem and the graphic that was used as well. Best of luck to you going forward from here.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This is a great presentation overall from start to finish. I love the wording of this poem and the graphic that was used as well. Best of luck to you going forward from here.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole.