Even In The Darkness
No matter how dim the path, light will appear.2 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
A wonderful poem! It follows a specific structure and the rhyme scheme is fabulous. I love it. And I love the word choice. Clear and easy to read and understand. Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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A wonderful poem! It follows a specific structure and the rhyme scheme is fabulous. I love it. And I love the word choice. Clear and easy to read and understand. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your comments, they are very uplifting.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I like the theme of your poem, Brett, that even in the darkness there is light, and so true if it is a long night by dark thoughts. I too think we can learn through some of our tough times, and find the light, if we are looking for it.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I like the theme of your poem, Brett, that even in the darkness there is light, and so true if it is a long night by dark thoughts. I too think we can learn through some of our tough times, and find the light, if we are looking for it.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Your comments were quite profound and sincere and build confidence in other writers. Thank you.