Sunrise greeting
The bedside window brings fresh air to greet the day2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yes. Fresh air does that. The house can get stale air And opening the window window gets that stale air out as well as bringing fresh air in
It's interesting that you would use the word tendril
Plants have tendrils. I like plants. Or maybe you chose tendril for another reason.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yes. Fresh air does that. The house can get stale air And opening the window window gets that stale air out as well as bringing fresh air in
It's interesting that you would use the word tendril
Plants have tendrils. I like plants. Or maybe you chose tendril for another reason.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your review. My reason for using the word tendril is I find the fresh air doesn?t rush in all at once. It curls in through small little breezes that I seek out as I lay there facing the window. I thought tendrils explained that sinewy way the air seems to move into the room.
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I agree. Thanks for the explanation
Comment from jessizero
This poem was lovely and met the requirements of the contest. The picture worked well with the poem. All in all, I'd say you did a great job! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This poem was lovely and met the requirements of the contest. The picture worked well with the poem. All in all, I'd say you did a great job! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read it and share your thoughts!