2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
That's scary. I like how you say "no witnesses" left to show there were no survivors and it somehow fits with the "lone thunderstorm" which makes it even more lonely.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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That's scary. I like how you say "no witnesses" left to show there were no survivors and it somehow fits with the "lone thunderstorm" which makes it even more lonely.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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You got it .... you always do.
Thank you very much for your excellent review, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very ominous poem. I could imagine the rough seas of the Mediterranean and how a smaller vessel could be swallowed. Very haunting and mysterious. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This was a very ominous poem. I could imagine the rough seas of the Mediterranean and how a smaller vessel could be swallowed. Very haunting and mysterious. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love thunderstorms!
this was great!
good satori of "no witnesses"
one suggestion: maybe leave off the 'left'?
eh just a thought
a great haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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love thunderstorms!
this was great!
good satori of "no witnesses"
one suggestion: maybe leave off the 'left'?
eh just a thought
a great haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written and so beautiful haiku you have done for the club. That artwork is so awesome. Someday I want you to show me how to get to artwork like that. This is amazing! Just like you sweet friend! Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very well written and so beautiful haiku you have done for the club. That artwork is so awesome. Someday I want you to show me how to get to artwork like that. This is amazing! Just like you sweet friend! Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
What a captivating and beautiful post. The strength of a thunderstorm is awesome to say the least. And your imagery vividly captures this power. It also speaks to the sad side of the reality that thunderstorms sometimes are the takers of life. I see that your title is "Thunder-stone" and I have had an experience of holding the ore many years ago.
RJ
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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What a captivating and beautiful post. The strength of a thunderstorm is awesome to say the least. And your imagery vividly captures this power. It also speaks to the sad side of the reality that thunderstorms sometimes are the takers of life. I see that your title is "Thunder-stone" and I have had an experience of holding the ore many years ago.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review. RJ. I fixed it 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh storms on the sea can be incredibly fierce at times, there was the sports in which Jonah was thrown over board to appease God, and the shipwrecks of Paul, all in the Mediterranean Sea, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Oh storms on the sea can be incredibly fierce at times, there was the sports in which Jonah was thrown over board to appease God, and the shipwrecks of Paul, all in the Mediterranean Sea, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy
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Welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In the title is this a typo?? 'Thunderstone' Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. We've had our share of thunderstorm lately. I guess Mother Nature is upset. We've even had rain. SUPRISE!!! I enjoyed reading and the entire presentation.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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In the title is this a typo?? 'Thunderstone' Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. We've had our share of thunderstorm lately. I guess Mother Nature is upset. We've even had rain. SUPRISE!!! I enjoyed reading and the entire presentation.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy