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Oak Tree's Shade

The shelter that trees provide is protection.

3 total reviews 
Comment from AP Apgar
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What a nice contest entry- with an excellent picture presentation supporting- your syllable count is good- and your words pose an interesting - who would I be without the shades protection- good job - AP

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much for your review and kind words!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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I love this! It's great overall! The picture is strong too! I could definatly sense the emotion behind this. Nothing like sitting under a tree and contemplating life.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much for your review! Your kind words are always appreciated. Have a lovely day.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

This is lovely and that last line is very clever. I like poems that surprise you. Especially at the end.


I guess she's lost. You can't really be found unless you're lost to begin with.

But I understand it might loss of emotion

Very intriguing Why did I say that? I don't know.

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words! I think more like lost in thought or emotion, or something along those lines. Have a nice day!