2024 Japanese Poetry
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5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written Dodoitsu poem you have penned for the Japanese Poetry club. You used great descriptive words and really neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very well written Dodoitsu poem you have penned for the Japanese Poetry club. You used great descriptive words and really neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
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You are so welcome. I love reading your work. You always have such lovely art and great words! love and blessings, teri
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. Mostly, I don't like the idea of cruises because of the possible diseases that spread so quickly all around the ship. But being eaten by sharks would be worse!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Oh-oh. Mostly, I don't like the idea of cruises because of the possible diseases that spread so quickly all around the ship. But being eaten by sharks would be worse!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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LoL. I don't like cruises either. Thank you big sister ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well, the reality is that fish do eat us if we were to die at sea and end up in the ocean's depths. One of the realities of life, I suppose. I think this is an excellent presentation for the club. I think that I am seeing a military armed sea vessel in the picture, and I'm wondering if this was the cause of the cruise ship's demise or was it just the storm? That's the way my mind works.
RJ
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Well, the reality is that fish do eat us if we were to die at sea and end up in the ocean's depths. One of the realities of life, I suppose. I think this is an excellent presentation for the club. I think that I am seeing a military armed sea vessel in the picture, and I'm wondering if this was the cause of the cruise ship's demise or was it just the storm? That's the way my mind works.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
sharks don't usually eat humans...
we're not a part of their diet; our bodies are two tough and have bigger bones then fish and marine mammals --
it's actually rare if they bite a human (despite their reputations lol)
that said, still a good dodoitsu with nice imagery of the boat being tossed in the thunderous storm...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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sharks don't usually eat humans...
we're not a part of their diet; our bodies are two tough and have bigger bones then fish and marine mammals --
it's actually rare if they bite a human (despite their reputations lol)
that said, still a good dodoitsu with nice imagery of the boat being tossed in the thunderous storm...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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have you watched Jaws? lol I heard that but I would not try it.
Thank you very much, Shelley
gypsy
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grew up watching jaws LOL!
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So many jaws but the first one was the best. "We're going to need a bigger boat" lol
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first ones usually are the best lol!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I saw the title I thought, I'd love to go on a Carribean Cruise with Gypsy. Then I thought of the wonderful romance that was probably in this poem. NOPE!!!! You tricked me and we're getting eating by sharks. LOL Great job writing this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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When I saw the title I thought, I'd love to go on a Carribean Cruise with Gypsy. Then I thought of the wonderful romance that was probably in this poem. NOPE!!!! You tricked me and we're getting eating by sharks. LOL Great job writing this poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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hahaha... sorry Barbara. A bit of horror to get the day going.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy