"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Ocearall"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem. I love to be at the beach and look at the beautiful body of water there and put my toes in the sand. Thanks for the reminder. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This is a very interesting and well written poem. I love to be at the beach and look at the beautiful body of water there and put my toes in the sand. Thanks for the reminder. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks Teri and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky
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You are so welcome! Blessings, Teri
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Every time you used Ocearall, you need a comma after it.
Ocearall (Overall??? It's the only word that makes sense here.)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Every time you used Ocearall, you need a comma after it.
Ocearall (Overall??? It's the only word that makes sense here.)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the review and comments.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Very nice overall and the graphic adds to it very nicely. I like the wording used here and the overall presentation. Best of luck going forward from here.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Very nice overall and the graphic adds to it very nicely. I like the wording used here and the overall presentation. Best of luck going forward from here.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks Nicole and enjoy the up and coming weekend.
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