Do Not Leer
Be sincere.2 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
A nice poem! I love how every line rhymes with the same thing, and you nailed 25 syllables! And a well-chosen font. Clear and easy to read. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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A nice poem! I love how every line rhymes with the same thing, and you nailed 25 syllables! And a well-chosen font. Clear and easy to read. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you. Your enthusiastic response cheers me on although my own poem tells me to exercise care about what I think I hear.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This flows along nicely overall. I like it from start to finish. I feel like a graphic might help hit the point home
even more! Great overall..best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This flows along nicely overall. I like it from start to finish. I feel like a graphic might help hit the point home
even more! Great overall..best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your encouragement. I am shy about graphics on Fan Story...But not everywhere. All the best to you.