Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

A most excellent use of rhymes and play of similar sounding words. It created a river like rushing flow that felt much more like a journey than a read. Well done, Doc!!!
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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Dorhanks ctor Ricky

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. I love your word choices including the phrases "Broken as cast repaired as Final Last" and "Bruised and Contused, lost and Refused". Wonderful word choices and also adds a rhythmic qualit. The poem's exploration of mortality and the transformative power of healing is deeply moving.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks michael for your most wonderful review.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Surgically Repaired, contains many ponds filled by reservoirs of history which speak to death, tissue donation, and the anger and joy that fill in all the other spots.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks bill for your wonderful review.And I hope everything is well on your side
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Yes, time presents...
Many, many, questions to be Pondered.
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So, ponder forth.
As ye finally come to realize.
Realize why?
Why Eye had to *Die?

Love this ocerall

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks again Nicole and enjoy your day.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. The internal rhymes where amazing. I enjoyed reading. One never gets over the loss of a child. One just learns to live with it.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Very True Barbara and how things?
Doctor Ricky 2024