They Steal Their ChancesToBeFree
The illicit bed of the adulterer4 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
This is an amazing temptation poem! It really has a wonderful rhyme scheme and syllable count, and the word choice is, as always, fabulous. The words flow smoothly. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This is an amazing temptation poem! It really has a wonderful rhyme scheme and syllable count, and the word choice is, as always, fabulous. The words flow smoothly. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the comments.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The first lines of this poem made a deep impression in me, "They slip into the evening places,
Into the crawl spaces of night ...
They disappear into the darkness shadows
Thinking their deeds are out of sight.
They steal from one another their chances to
be free,". The poem points out the dangers of adultery and prostitution. It makes one a prisoner for ever and harms the soul and body together. Well done, dear Brett. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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The first lines of this poem made a deep impression in me, "They slip into the evening places,
Into the crawl spaces of night ...
They disappear into the darkness shadows
Thinking their deeds are out of sight.
They steal from one another their chances to
be free,". The poem points out the dangers of adultery and prostitution. It makes one a prisoner for ever and harms the soul and body together. Well done, dear Brett. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Much appreciated comments and very well explained.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem speaks a world of truth. Anymore, people don't even try to hide their evil acts of adultery. Your poem is well executed and a good entry for the temptation contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Your poem speaks a world of truth. Anymore, people don't even try to hide their evil acts of adultery. Your poem is well executed and a good entry for the temptation contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the very insightful comments. Your reply in itself was inspiring
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Your response was inspiring. Thank you.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
They slip into the evening places,
Into the crawl spaces of night ...
They disappear into the darkness shadows
Thinking their deeds are out of sight.
They steal from one another their chances to
be free,
Awesome job
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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They slip into the evening places,
Into the crawl spaces of night ...
They disappear into the darkness shadows
Thinking their deeds are out of sight.
They steal from one another their chances to
be free,
Awesome job
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to even reply to the posting of my poem. Your reply was in itself encouraging.