Jersey's World
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "JW - Part 4"A stripper and a murder.
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
The chapter starts with Paige and Kate, and discussing the rape of Kate. While the college student and competitive swimmer, was traumatized by what happened to her by Simon, she was willing to help with his prosecution.
The next part of the story focuses on Paige, now Jersey, and her stripping act at the club. She can't see the audience, so that gives us a sense that there is someone or something out there that will cause her harm. It builds up suspense.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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The chapter starts with Paige and Kate, and discussing the rape of Kate. While the college student and competitive swimmer, was traumatized by what happened to her by Simon, she was willing to help with his prosecution.
The next part of the story focuses on Paige, now Jersey, and her stripping act at the club. She can't see the audience, so that gives us a sense that there is someone or something out there that will cause her harm. It builds up suspense.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is the only chapter I have read of your story. I found it exciting and intriguing. The dialogue is perfect and moves the story forward at a nice pace. I will watch for more of this story. Nice work.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This is the only chapter I have read of your story. I found it exciting and intriguing. The dialogue is perfect and moves the story forward at a nice pace. I will watch for more of this story. Nice work.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you. 1-2 more parts to come.