Jersey's World
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "JW - Part 3"A stripper and a murder.
2 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, Jersey had a great lead for the police, but she wasn't taken seriously. You would think they would be more than happy to get something tangible.
I'm suspecting poor Jersey is going to have a tough time getting justice for her friend.
You have an engaging writing style, and a unique setting and characters.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Oh wow, Jersey had a great lead for the police, but she wasn't taken seriously. You would think they would be more than happy to get something tangible.
I'm suspecting poor Jersey is going to have a tough time getting justice for her friend.
You have an engaging writing style, and a unique setting and characters.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Jersey was in one of these private rooms, horizontal and face down on a middle-aged executive of some sort, moving her body in rhythm with the music. Her customer, who'd been too shy to interact with her much in the club's main room, was now moaning with pleasure. Anyone who didn't know better would think Jersey and the executive were actually having sex. The fact one of the parties still had on all their clothes might dispel this notion.
Kept my attention all the way through
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Jersey was in one of these private rooms, horizontal and face down on a middle-aged executive of some sort, moving her body in rhythm with the music. Her customer, who'd been too shy to interact with her much in the club's main room, was now moaning with pleasure. Anyone who didn't know better would think Jersey and the executive were actually having sex. The fact one of the parties still had on all their clothes might dispel this notion.
Kept my attention all the way through
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.