Muse of Love
You inspire words of love6 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
The piece, Muse of Love, is properly presented in the 5-7-5 syllable count as specified in the contest rules. The poem was well done, and engenders sweet reflections. Good luck in the contest.
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The piece, Muse of Love, is properly presented in the 5-7-5 syllable count as specified in the contest rules. The poem was well done, and engenders sweet reflections. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Just beautiful, mystery poet. I like you use of oft for often, it's rather Shakespearean and gives your poem a cutting edge in the contest. A winner in my eyes! Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
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Just beautiful, mystery poet. I like you use of oft for often, it's rather Shakespearean and gives your poem a cutting edge in the contest. A winner in my eyes! Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we are loved, we are inspired to tell the world how we feel and sing love's song to others, I enjoyed your lively post for the contes, love Dolly x x x
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When we are loved, we are inspired to tell the world how we feel and sing love's song to others, I enjoyed your lively post for the contes, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
Comment from RodG
I can easily hear one of the famous song writers of the 30s uttering these words. So many great love songs came from that era. And the most "exuberant" were tunes sung on Broadway. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I can easily hear one of the famous song writers of the 30s uttering these words. So many great love songs came from that era. And the most "exuberant" were tunes sung on Broadway. Rod
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Rod,
Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate that you were able to hear in this poem the comparison to famous song writers of the 30s.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from LJbutterfly
Many poets and writers can relate to your acknowledgement of the guiding light and inspiration a muse can provide. Based on the way I pronounce words, your second line sounds like six syllables rather than seven. If you count seven, please accept my apology for mentioning it. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Many poets and writers can relate to your acknowledgement of the guiding light and inspiration a muse can provide. Based on the way I pronounce words, your second line sounds like six syllables rather than seven. If you count seven, please accept my apology for mentioning it. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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LJButterfly,
Thank you for your helpful review. You are correct. There are only six syllables. I added the word oft to the second line. The poem reads
Muse, my guiding light,
your embrace oft inspires love's
exuberant songs
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Muse, my guiding light,
your embrace inspires love's
exuberant songs.
This is strong overall good job and best of luck going forward with your woek
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Muse, my guiding light,
your embrace inspires love's
exuberant songs.
This is strong overall good job and best of luck going forward with your woek
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024