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Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written 575 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with all good things. Patric.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This is a nicely written 575 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with all good things. Patric.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Sally Law
I'm happy for you mystery poetess. Congratulations! Beautifully written and illustrated love poem of your grand romance. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I'm happy for you mystery poetess. Congratulations! Beautifully written and illustrated love poem of your grand romance. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, you're always so kind with your reviews. :)
Comment from zaraduck6
This was a wonderful poem! I love the introduction line and the word choice of the love haiku. If I may make a couple of suggestions: I think it would be better if the font was something a little bit more readable so people can read it easier. I myself have trouble reading fonts like cursive. And a second thing: In the author's notes, I think you mean to say "My future husband and I," instead of "My future husband an I." Overall, really wonderful poem. The rhyme scheme throughout is brilliant. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This was a wonderful poem! I love the introduction line and the word choice of the love haiku. If I may make a couple of suggestions: I think it would be better if the font was something a little bit more readable so people can read it easier. I myself have trouble reading fonts like cursive. And a second thing: In the author's notes, I think you mean to say "My future husband and I," instead of "My future husband an I." Overall, really wonderful poem. The rhyme scheme throughout is brilliant. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this great review and the correction.. both are very appreciated.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a delightful love poem for the contest. The syllable count is perfect, and the end rhymes at additional interest to the piece. The picture pairs perfectly and intensifies the message. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This is a delightful love poem for the contest. The syllable count is perfect, and the end rhymes at additional interest to the piece. The picture pairs perfectly and intensifies the message. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you, that's very kind. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Strong poem overall and good presentation. I like way Thia is laid out.
Keep up the good work and best of luck going forward with your work from here.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Strong poem overall and good presentation. I like way Thia is laid out.
Keep up the good work and best of luck going forward with your work from here.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this nice review. :)