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Enticement

Prelude to love

2 total reviews 
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Excellent
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Moist lips kiss my neck,

fragrant hair brushes my cheek,

and my pulse quickens.

I like this! You can feel the intense emotions behind it. Well done overall as these poems are difficult to write.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Nicole.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Enticement, has the proper formatting and hints to the subtle and perhaps unconscious actions which have stood the putter up for a quick tee-time.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Very well phrased, and thanks.