2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is just beautiful! You used great descriptive words and awesome imagery. I truly wish I knew how to do that. I enjoy reading and looking at your imagery. Thanks for always telling us about it. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Gypsy, This is just beautiful! You used great descriptive words and awesome imagery. I truly wish I knew how to do that. I enjoy reading and looking at your imagery. Thanks for always telling us about it. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
For anyone who has felt the pleasure and tranquility of drifting away in a hammock , this is quite relatable. Your words are beautiful and coupled with the photo they paint a mesmerizing imagery. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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For anyone who has felt the pleasure and tranquility of drifting away in a hammock , this is quite relatable. Your words are beautiful and coupled with the photo they paint a mesmerizing imagery. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh... a dreamy hammock poem with soothing imagery and flow swinging under the moon... nice!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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ooh... a dreamy hammock poem with soothing imagery and flow swinging under the moon... nice!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I smiled at the ending: 'I forgot to send you a message
with the drifting clouds' Now that's downright funny!!! I guess this person got so comfortable in the hammock that all thoughts drifted away. Beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I smiled at the ending: 'I forgot to send you a message
with the drifting clouds' Now that's downright funny!!! I guess this person got so comfortable in the hammock that all thoughts drifted away. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I enjoyed the sounds of your poem especially the internal rhyming and consonance in "lazy gazing at the silver moon
amazed by its razzle-dazzle --"
And you added some humor about the distracted mind forgetting to send a message. Was the message to a person or the moon?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed the sounds of your poem especially the internal rhyming and consonance in "lazy gazing at the silver moon
amazed by its razzle-dazzle --"
And you added some humor about the distracted mind forgetting to send a message. Was the message to a person or the moon?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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No, it's poetic, not literal lol sending a message to your lover or friend 😉
Thank you very much big sister
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Marival
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Comment from Nicole Schmidt
my hammock,
lazy gazing at the silver moon
amazed by its razzle-dazzle
Oh the lazy hammock days...how wonderful they are. All the best going forward.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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my hammock,
lazy gazing at the silver moon
amazed by its razzle-dazzle
Oh the lazy hammock days...how wonderful they are. All the best going forward.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicole
Gypsy