Thatâ??s What Faith Will For You
A poem about faith2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Brett. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
A nice poem about belief in God. You know you have a lot of grammatical errors. You know, right? I figure you made them on purpose so I am leaving them alone.
Recognizable rhyming pattern.
The fanstory gremlin got you in your title. It does not like double quotes
" Thatâ??s What Faith Will For You"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Hi, Brett. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
A nice poem about belief in God. You know you have a lot of grammatical errors. You know, right? I figure you made them on purpose so I am leaving them alone.
Recognizable rhyming pattern.
The fanstory gremlin got you in your title. It does not like double quotes
" Thatâ??s What Faith Will For You"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the grammatical errors coaching. All jokes aside I will need help in the future with that
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No problem. I?m here
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Make you joyful though the world be sad,
Tuck you in the bed of peace,
Will gives you things you never had,
Your every care will be released.
Will land you safe through desert sands,
Will make of you brand new,
Place you safely in the Master's hands,
That's what faith will do for you.
I feel all the emotion behind this
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Make you joyful though the world be sad,
Tuck you in the bed of peace,
Will gives you things you never had,
Your every care will be released.
Will land you safe through desert sands,
Will make of you brand new,
Place you safely in the Master's hands,
That's what faith will do for you.
I feel all the emotion behind this
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Each time I read this poem I experience a similar emotion as that of the gracious commenter.