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Magnets

The attraction of opposites

8 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Oh dear me - that might spell trouble for him. Different and original presentation of the theme. the stark red and white presentation is very appropriate. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Wendy!
Comment from Julie Helms
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You have written a sexy naani, drawing the contrast and collision between lipstick and the white starched collar! I like how you describe it in a roundabout way. Nice graphic to accompany it.

Julie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thanks so much, Julie!
Comment from zaraduck6
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This is a very well-done naani poem! The words really paint a picture in my mind, and the choice of red against white for the words along with the chosen image really adds to it. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you! :)
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Clever juxtaposition of colors. I thought the white would be his white skin

I think of lipstick on a white collar as belonging to the other woman. Tee hee. Absolutely no reason it can't be her significant other

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you! :)
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This is a nicely written four liner.free m the lips point of view. This could be a sign of love or betrayal.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thanks Joan!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This naani, Magnets, has the proper formatting and gives a graphic example of the outgoing and flirtatious being paired with the conservative and withheld.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Bill!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An indelible imprint of either betrayal or true love here and I enjoyed your unique post for the prompt and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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e are a splash of color,
a contrast soft and bold,
like my deep crimson kiss
on your crisp, white collar.


How true is this?? Great graphics and diaplay

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you! :)