Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

Just tell the truth in that courtroom and you might just get off with a rapping of the knuckles and a warning! At least it was only a slap; the doctor is still walking isn't he?? Hee hee :-) Funny stuff.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

The doctor turned the other cheek, so I slapped that aswell! Haha
I get out next March :)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is silly and fun and makes me smile! The image complements your verse well with the doctor and his red face. And the message is clear: go to the hearing specialist now! Great job! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thank you, Debbie :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I got a laugh out of this naani poem. You told it in a funny way, and I liked your rhymes. You seem to have gotten the syllables correct, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024

Thank you, Jessi :)

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

He said I was obese.
I thought he said, 'A Beast'.
I slapped the Doctor's cheek.
I'm due in court next week.

Oops!!!!

This was a fun one to read in the graphic goes along perfectly too

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024

Thank you, Nicole :)