Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I really like the depth of emotion expressed in your poem. I think it highlights a persistent issue with the human condition...the what if's.
Nicely worded and an interesting and appropriate photo to accompany it.
Very enjoyable!
Julie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We look back at our failures and wish we could have changed things but the only way to live is to move forward and we gain experience along the way, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like the last line in particular. But, I also like the second line a lot. This is one of those ethereal poems that just get your mind off on a trip.

Deep and hauntingly beautiful

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Very nice..I love the second phrase best. (Echoes, memories, dreams ... all these
are part of hope.) But 2nd phrase has the cadence making reading poetry fun. Beautiful sentiment. Best of luck in contest!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Echoes linger on,

Shattered dreams in whispers fade,

Memories of what could have been,

Hope's haunting silence.

Great overall

All the best going forward

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024