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The Twilight

A Rensaku, or multiple haiku's strung together.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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Dreams oh so endless

What have you done to me now

Stuck betwixt waking

A twilight most foul

Spent on the dimly lit shore

Sol and lune above

Great work overall I really enjoyed this

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned about dreams returning to the waking world. You used great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024