Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Sarah,

This is an excellent first milestone post here on Fanstory. Your talent and skill for writing beautiful romantic poetry is inspired by your deep emotions within your soul. I admire your ability to create wonderful metaphors to describe the emotional depths of your words.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

thank you so much for the kind review, unfortunately there are rumors all my work since 2019 has been stolen by Beyoncé and Jay Z but I never listen to rap songs to be able to sue them for intellectual property theft, many thanks for checking whether that?s true or not, if you could,
Best regards,
Sarah
https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100069644771141

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

congratulations on your first milestone post. You used great descriptive words that were full of great imagery. You gave great visual with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

Many thanks Teri, for your kind words of support, all the best. Sarah

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Her eyes are like sapphires,

The one his heart desires,

Her brows fields of agar,

Her neck a gold pillar,

Her face a museum full of art,

Her love a cure for his heart,

Mysterious like the night,

She is a beauty divine,


Great work I enjoyed this very much

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

am so glad you like my poem, many thanks for your review )