Child's glee
Naani poem2 total reviews
Comment from DragonSkulls
This is a great little piece for the contest, author. I'm just wondering what part of the rules you didn't quite understand. You have the 4 lines part correct but the syllable count is supposed to be between 20 to 25. You're at least 10 syllables over. It would be okay if it were asking for 20 to 25 'words.' But it's asking for 20 to 25 syllables. Let me know if you fix it and I'll up the rating. Just giving you a heads up before the FS committee threaten disqualification for not following the rules.
DS
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This is a great little piece for the contest, author. I'm just wondering what part of the rules you didn't quite understand. You have the 4 lines part correct but the syllable count is supposed to be between 20 to 25. You're at least 10 syllables over. It would be okay if it were asking for 20 to 25 'words.' But it's asking for 20 to 25 syllables. Let me know if you fix it and I'll up the rating. Just giving you a heads up before the FS committee threaten disqualification for not following the rules.
DS
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
A child giggles with glee
Inspired by his carespirit free.
Watching the world pass by alongside spree
And teaching how to love unconditionally.
How great is this? Very cute. Best of luck going forward
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A child giggles with glee
Inspired by his carespirit free.
Watching the world pass by alongside spree
And teaching how to love unconditionally.
How great is this? Very cute. Best of luck going forward
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024