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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Home is the best place to be, or it should be. We should get loved and find peace. Then we can praise God for all the wonderful things we have. Your presentation is wonderful. Thank you.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Another lovely gogyohka poem about the joy of gratitude for the love we have. Remembering all that we have should naturally result in a "song of praise" to the Lord.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Have a wonderful weekend.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from Ricky1024
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Liked the art, beautiful as always.
This is a Gogyohka five-line freestyle
Well presented Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Evening has always been my favorite time of the day, and by nature, I am an early morning riser. As your words express here, it is a time when I often praise my God and the ones I love. It is a time of my deepest reflection. Your words are very relatable to my own life. Beautiful and inspirational.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 07-Jun-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written poem about home at even. You used such beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose, and your words were great as always! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Teri

    Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
reply by Teri7 on 07-Jun-2024
    you are so welcome my friend! I hope you have a great one too!!!
Comment from shelley kaye
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it's always grateful to be back home
away from the crowds lol

a great gogyohka --
home at eventide
with a grateful heart
and a song of praise --

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy