2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful poem, Marival. I enjoyed the whole composition. It vibrates with happiness and positive loving emotions. I love to wake and feel the promise of the day. And while I no longer have the reality of a lover's eyes to cherish me at day's end, I have memories to make me smile and family love that enfolds me like a fragrant blanket
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Beautiful poem, Marival. I enjoyed the whole composition. It vibrates with happiness and positive loving emotions. I love to wake and feel the promise of the day. And while I no longer have the reality of a lover's eyes to cherish me at day's end, I have memories to make me smile and family love that enfolds me like a fragrant blanket
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like the idea of waking up and the first thing that meets is you and your loves eyes meet. That would start the day off perfectly. Once again your presentation and your poem are above all the rest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I like the idea of waking up and the first thing that meets is you and your loves eyes meet. That would start the day off perfectly. Once again your presentation and your poem are above all the rest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much,
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love this because of its simplicity in what is really important in life. To look into someone's eyes and feel complete, or see the whole world in that one gaze, says everything. This was a beautiful and romantic poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I love this because of its simplicity in what is really important in life. To look into someone's eyes and feel complete, or see the whole world in that one gaze, says everything. This was a beautiful and romantic poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Another finely crafted Gogyohka.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks again for sharing this and enjoy your day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Another finely crafted Gogyohka.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks again for sharing this and enjoy your day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much,
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely gogyohkah poem of gratitude for love. From the start of the day and to the end of the day, it's good to remember to love and celebrate the love we have.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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A lovely gogyohkah poem of gratitude for love. From the start of the day and to the end of the day, it's good to remember to love and celebrate the love we have.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister
Have a wonderful weekend.
Love
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think that love is often seen through the eyes of the heart, a,sparkle that glistens like twilight. I can interpret your words in several ways, but to me they are about one lover, expressing the way her partner makes her feel.
Thank you for sharing, I alwsys find your presentations of your work ti be stunning.
RJ
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I think that love is often seen through the eyes of the heart, a,sparkle that glistens like twilight. I can interpret your words in several ways, but to me they are about one lover, expressing the way her partner makes her feel.
Thank you for sharing, I alwsys find your presentations of your work ti be stunning.
RJ
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think, if you can start and finish your day like this, the middle part must be pretty good too! This is nicely done in your 5 line verse with dramatic, eye-catching visual. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I think, if you can start and finish your day like this, the middle part must be pretty good too! This is nicely done in your 5 line verse with dramatic, eye-catching visual. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool gogyohka on the hopefulness of dawn
nice imagery and smooth flow
the pic at the bottom... maybe make it lower? so it's right on the textbox end? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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cool gogyohka on the hopefulness of dawn
nice imagery and smooth flow
the pic at the bottom... maybe make it lower? so it's right on the textbox end? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy