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Staying in dream land for just a little longer
2 total reviews
Comment from
Nicole Schmidt
In this tiptoe sleepy gray room,
Her heart postpones the day,
Between alarms her dreams resume,
As she holds all her problems at bay
Love this!! Flows very nicely
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from
RodG
Good description of the bedroom as "tiptoe gray."
We SEE this woman sleeping through alarms, obviously very content with her dreams.
The ABAB rhymes are well-chosen.
Rod
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
Thanks so much for reading it and taking the time to respond.
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