Gems
Sparkling memories.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. What an image!! Just beautiful
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This poem is very poignant. It is uplifting. Uplifted from what? That part, I'm missing.
It's ok to leave things mysterious though because that causes your readers to think
I repeat. Welcome to fanstory
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi. What an image!! Just beautiful
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This poem is very poignant. It is uplifting. Uplifted from what? That part, I'm missing.
It's ok to leave things mysterious though because that causes your readers to think
I repeat. Welcome to fanstory
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam. It's just the nuggets (gems) of good memories/experiences we collect, help us through the bad times :)
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Yes. It is. I understood that. So the memories was the uplifting part. Sorry I did not allude to that in my review
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"Thumbs up" Thank you x
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Gems, has the proper formatting and notes the use of stored up power that unfurls and provides the push to succeed along the way.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This four-line poem, Gems, has the proper formatting and notes the use of stored up power that unfurls and provides the push to succeed along the way.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Bill.