Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I'm not sure, but if this was my entry I'd put a warning label for sexual content on this. Some people would ding you on stars for it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

Thanks Earl!

I appreciate the concern and warning hopefully not all members will ding my poem.

Hope you have a great weekend!

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

With ravenous appetite
my lover covers my snow white
skin with fervent love bites.

I grip my sheets, fists tight
and arch my back in rapturous delight.

I love the wording used in this!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

I?m glad someone enjoyed my poem.

I need to work more on the meter so the flow is better.

Thank you for the kind feedback ! Much appreciated