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A reflection of Glaucoma

A poem about Glaucoma

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I can identify with this post as I have failing eyesight and nothing can be done about it. It is a battle that I am losing and your poem is poignant. Congratulations on your 200th post Shavon, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

Comment from NanaGaye
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Thanks so much for sharing your life with us on Fanstory. You are so brave. I hope you don't mind but I think some words could be deleted ie

The world may not behold my private strife,
In the shadows,
Onward I trudge

Very best wishes to you Keep on being so positive

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024