Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, we definitely take risks when we go into a relationship. I think before we get into too deep, we need to make sure we're in love and in lust. There's a huge difference. I prefer love not lust. God's guidance will help us with that decision. Great presentation.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review, Barbara

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

like a brook singing the night's song -- love this image!!
also love the last stanza with "dare to feel deep pain"
very thought-provoking line!
nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review, Shelley

Gypsy

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I'm glad that you are still writing about love, lust and burning desire. I used to write short stories full of burning desire and hot sex. Not so much nowadays.

Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

I still write about lust and desire but yesterday I was trying something new.
Thank you very much for your excellent review, Lisa

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You give wise advice to choose real love over pursuing passion. Love could cause some "deep pain due to too much tenderness." But the investment of that love reaps a reward beyond this world.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well.

Love

Marival